So... what just happened? The end had me paralyzed in a 'wtf' pose... then I laughed, hard.
So... what just happened? The end had me paralyzed in a 'wtf' pose... then I laughed, hard.
The ending... oh... shi...
Not sure what I can add for constructive criticism, but I'm pretty sure the hawk was going 'wtf just happened...'
nice... I enjoyed that ending... very nice...
I wish, I found your work much, much sooner
All I can say is... whoa, at first it was rather cute, a kid believing his can time travel, the ending... whoa. there is a lesson somewhere in here, intended or not, and the anime style was done pretty good and everyone seemed alive, especially arthur (he is the focus after all)
It's difficult too say much after reading alot of comments because I always want too try and say something that hasn't been mentioned, but I will try.
The music is nice and simple, but still conveys emotion much like any instrument should be able too do (unless I'm mistaken it was only piano) The loop was... off a little, yes, and maybe there could have been something more, prominent, but I'm not the best for picking up on subtle things.
Living where I am, I rarely hear about L&G hate in my community, ill admit I myself do have a... slight, awkwardness towards it, but hey, if it's what makes people happy then go for it, it's your life, live it how you want it! However I know alot of parts in this world are against that, and this is what your trying too portray, religion and 'most' political figures (depending who you know and what policies they enforce) do infact reject homosexuality, even in the face of public acceptance of such romances, and while the cases of hate get carried more then acceptance, it does happen, hell my mom has a friend who is a gay male, they are happy, I support it and Vancouver has the pride parade, a celebration of gays and lesbians.
As for the negative... other then, of course, the male portion, while I understand the point of it, it was a little... too, anti-male (btw anybody find it weird how there is a defined female sexism and not male sexism? if it's equal rights, doesn't that mean equal fights, so too speak) However the second complaint, was that it was a little... too dark, I mean yes it's necessary, but maybe like... the one person, who follows the 'warriors' without a sword and maybe shows regret, or maybe the republican had a 'secretary' who could be trying too convince him otherwise, or defend the two, a stronger hint of light through out. I know that the woman in the end saved one of the main characters, kudos, but it just felt like, it was the only person, like there is no one else, why? Maybe because I myself am that kind of person who grew up in a very accepting part of society that I expect more people then portrayed too be accepting of it.
As my final note of where I stand it's this: Society should never consist of 'defined personalities'. EVER. It's the uniqueness of every given person that not only makes society stronger, but pushes it beyond what people would believe it's limits are. If people could just, learn too let it be, they don't even have too accept it, but at the same time, it is these struggles that make the passionate moments all the more beautiful, so what would you rather have, a monotone world of light, or a dark world where the bright areas shine all the stronger? there is my question for you
Bringing this profile back from the dead.
Age 34, Male
abbotsford, BC
Joined on 9/11/08